Little Red with a twist.

WALT: write a narrative using correct punctuation and sentences.

for this week my writing is about little red riding hood but it is with a twist so we had to make up our own little red riding hood so her is mine.

Meeting the but bad wolf. On one cold snowy morning blue riding hood and red riding hood’s Mother asked them if they wanted to go and visit, her grandmother because she was very sick. She made some muffins and put them in a basket and let them go into the forest. They both were wearing their favourite jacket and of course it was blue winter jacket for blue riding hood and a red winter jacket for red riding hood. They set of into the forest and they were happy to go and visit there granny. BUT…  when they were walking they didn't even notice that the big bad wolf was there. But just then the big bad wolf had jumped in front of them they were very scared.



Saving granny and red riding hood.Red riding hood and blue riding hood were so scared but they thought that he was going to be nice. Red riding hood ask what his name was but they found out the the big bad wolf was a girl so the big bad wolf ask them what they were doing in the woods all alone. So they said that there granny was sick and they wanted to go and visit her and see if she is ok so that is why we are in the forest.the big bad wolf was so happy she was going to have a fest. So the big bad wolf needed some time so she asked them if they wanted to pick some flowers for your sick granny so they picked up flowers while they were doing that the big bad wolf ran as fast as she could. But when she got there she walked in the door and saw granny and then he just jumped on granny and locked her in the closet just as The big bad wolf got into granny's bed blue Riding Hood and Red Riding Hood knocked on the door and then she had to Talk like granny to act sick blue Red Riding Hood and Red Riding Hood when inside and granny but it was actually the big bad wolf. Blue Riding Hood said “What big ears you have” So it's better to hear you with my dear then  Red Riding Hood said “granny what big eyes you have” so granny said”Better to see you with my dear”But then they said “granny what big teeth you have” Granny said eat you with my dear”The big bad wolf jumped out of the bed and jump and grab Red Riding Hood and blue Riding Hood went to go save her. Blue Riding Hood found a woodcutter and then the woodcutter came inside and scared the wolf away but the wolf wasn't fast enough so the woodcutter just chop him up and then blue Riding Hood and red Riding Hood went to go find granny They found her in a Closet.


Having a nice fest

When granny got out of the closet she was ready to fight but then she realized that they already got her so they, just cooked her up and had her for dinner red riding hood and blue riding hood haven’t had wolf before well they haven’t had big bad wolf before. This is the end of my red riding hood with a twist.