Wednesday, 6 June 2018

my writing

Today we had to show what we can write when we have 40 min to write without talking to others.we were able to work quietly to complete the task.

Once a upon a time there was a farmer he had eight animals.He named them spirit the Donkey, Checalinda the cow, Lucky the bee,Snowball the rabbit,Hannah the first ruster,Angla the second rooster and last but not lest Moala and West the birds. One day Dave the farmer guy, he got an invitation to a animals party on wednesday, it was at the top of the sky tower in town. Dave packed his stuff and got everything he needs for all his animals, he was so excited so were the animals.

Spirit was not that happy like everyone else he wa happy inside thow. When Dave was driving on the way to town they were not the far from town it’s only a ten minute drive, from the farm. Suddenly they ran out of GAS!!! of course that Dave had an idea but it was a boring they had to walk they were almost there but they all got lost.Dave had to run as fast as he could to go back to the car and grab the map to where they are going. All the animals were so angry at Dave the to birds were flying around, the roosters were making a hole lot of noises, and snowball was bouncing around the rest of the animal were just sitting there. Finally Dave was back they all got there ten minutes before the party started but they all still had fun they we so tired but they got a ride home.

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