THIS IS MY WRITING I PRE EDITED THIS WITH ZYLA. HER AND I DID SOME READING AND WE HELPED EACH OTHER WITH OUR WORDS AND OUR SPELLING AND ALSO OUR FULL STOPS AND CAPITULATE LETTERS.
On one blinding morning Lydia and Hannah got up to go to school they are best friends. The cool thing is that they are Neighbours there is a tree in front of the window. Then they can climb on the tree and meet in the middle so they can talk and stuff.One day Lydia went on a trip with Hannah and there family “ I am so excited to see the cabin” Lydia said.A few minutes later they finally got to the cabin but next to the cabin was a glistening marble bench shining throw from the sunlight. Lydia’s and Hannah's family was so shocked it was beautiful but then the cloud covered the sunlight so then the bench was just a shiny marble bench it was still cool though.
They find a map.
The next day they had an outstanding breakfast after that they were so full “lunch is also coming up to” said Lydia. After there breakfast Lydia and Hannah had a play outside the sun was so bright. But the clouds looked like it was going to rain but that did not bother them when they were playing they saw a dried out mountain and a dusty stone wall. Of course Hannah had to go and blow the dust of but it went everywhere in Lydia’s hair to so she just, went inside and had to go wet her hair but then Hannah found something that said “ you must find this map to lead you to this place so you can find out the secret that has been made.”
The mountain is a sparkly castle.
Once they looked at the message they searched the house.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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