reading summery 2

Bella saw this dog his name was Sid but Sid was not at the net wagging his tail wagging making cute faces. So Bella said to Jo the manager ''what happen to this dog''Jo said '' hes been here for four months so he gave up because all the people all whys walk past him so he gave up''. then Sid woke up and he was so cute with the fluffy ears and the black and white dots was so cute. but that was all I got to read today but were nearly up to chapter 2 I wounder what will happen will they buy the dog or will they leave him there I cant wait. 

Dictation

The moon was probably made 4.5 billion years ago,when a large object hit the Earth and blasted out rocks that came together,to orbit around the Earth.The moon is much smaller than the Earth.It is airless,water less and lifeless.The gravity of the moon forces two high tides on the Earth every day.The first person to walk on the moon was the American astronaut Neil Armstrong.He stepped out of his spacecraft the Eagle on 21 of July 1969 and said these famous words”that’s one small step for man one giant leap for mankind.”

writing sample

On one beautiful morning there was a astronaut called Tom and he was getting ready to boost out with adventure in his rocket ship.Tom is ready to blast into space. He did the countdown 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2.1  BLAST OFF Tom was out of Earth and saw the satellite Tom almost crashed into it but he didn't ,he landed on Mars when he landed and jumped out he saw a three eyed alien popping out of the hole he looked very angry. Tom look left then saw a three headed alien coming out and Tom  grabbed a rock and threw it to the alien but the alien coat it and eat it when eat it he then turned gray like that rock Tom threw,Tom was over with Mar so he got back into his space ship and went to Jupiter  on Jupiter there was a alien party going on there were oring ones and there were purple ones and all these other ones to so Tom hopped out of his spaceship and he danced and danced till he couldn't dance no more.

So when it was time to go to another planet he jumped into his spaceship and flew of to the moon.On the moon there were no aliens there were no parties but there were other astronauts and one lonely alien that popped out when Tom saw the lonely thing he said to himself “I'm going to find the aliens mother” So he went to Jupiter again to see if he can find anyone how is sad and looked like a mother that lost a alien when Tom looked up  he saw a lady alien that was crying so hard like they a baby alien so  he thort that that was his mother so he went to the moon and grabbed the baby and went back to Jupiter when got back to Jupiter he   gave the baby to the mummy alien and she stopped crying and gave Tom a big hug and aliens are slimey so he got slimed. He is over with all the alien staff so he boostered out to Earth.So he went home and tolled everyone his story.

When he was finished telling his story they watched a movie.  The movie was similar to Tom’s  adventure and he said”I want to go back again one day because it was fun also I had a party with some aliens.”

Immersion Assembly

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PARAGRAPH 1

First while everybody was waiting we all were steering at the stars on the roof.Suddenly all the lights turned off then everybody started screaming. After a while there was a UFO on the ground,  it flew all the way to the stage and everybody stopped screaming. Mr. J thort there was aliens in it but there was not just one big alien, there were two big aliens and they were walking around the stage but Mr.J and Mr Samalive saved the day with their lightsabers and they killed them (it was fake by the way).After that Mr.Bert came in he “wasn't that cool” the school answered him and said”YES”next Mr.Bert talked and talked.   

PARAGRAPH 2

After all the aliens and talking it was time for TEAM 1 so we watched the video that they made, and of course it was about space because this term we are learning about space any way.Once we were ready to watch the movie it turned on there were 6 loving teachers then they each flew out to space they all went to different places.After awhile they started missing their children so they all went back to school. Later when the movie was finished Mr.Bert came back he said “how cool was that”. Mrs Hockley came out to tell us what Team 1 is doing.They are learning about Sun,Mars,Moon.

PARAGRAPH 3

Soon when Mrs.Hockley was finish talking, it was time for team 2. So Mr.J  turned the movie on.it was not a movie it was a song with the teachers in space they were so funny it made some people laugh and it made me laugh to. During the movie me friend Heimata came late so she sat next to me. And I missed the rest of the movie but it ok if I missed it. When the movie was finished Mr.Bret loved the movie so did we, but then Mrs. Nolder was going to talk to us about what they're doing,so there learning about the sun and moon.

Subtracting 10s and 1s

               this week I have been learning how to tack away and this is how we do it.

                                    hope you like it 

Question	10’s	1’s	Answer
34-21=	30 - 20 = 10	4 - 1 = 3	13
64 -33 =	60-30=30	4-3=1	31
58-24=	50-20=30	8-4=4	34
74-53=	70-50=20	4-3=1	21
89-56=	80-50=30	9-6=3	33
53-22=	50-20=30	3-2=1	31
34-13=	30-10=20	4-3=1	21
53-11=	50-1=40	3-1=2	42
25-12=	20-10=10	5-2=3	13
53-31=	50-30=20	3-1=2	22
46-25=	40-20=20	6-5=1	21
64-31=	60-30=30	4-1=3	33
78-53=	70-50=20	8-3=5	25
53-21=	50-20=30	2-1=1	31
42-11=	40-10=30	2-1=1	31
69-46=	60-40=20	9-6=3	23

seasons

my yo yo writing

Today we have been writing and how long they have been out so hope you injoy my writing  

A yoyo is an ancient toy that children enjoy playing with.a yo yo is  a really old toy that children love playing with,they are very old they have been out for 1500 years from India and Greece.Because people love them. You can play with your friends and do  tricks with your yo yo, like rock the baby, sky tower, walk the dog and you do more tricks. If you keep on trying you can get amazing at it.